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(Frage) beantwortet  | | Datum: | 22:13 Di 19.01.2010 | | Autor: | MonaMoe |
| Aufgabe | Although increased in recent years, the international vigilance on money laundering, not only in public, but also in the private sector, criminals always find ways to money laundering. For example, money laundering through the online banking (erleichtert).
Professional mediation platforms, such as the auction platform, eBay is "publicly available and easily accessible from everywhere, internationally, with high transaction volumes, etc., and thus have a strong appeal for criminals to abuse them for money laundering purposes. |
Ich bitte um Korrektur
Vielen Dank im Voraus
Mona
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(Antwort) fertig  | | Datum: | 20:14 Mi 20.01.2010 | | Autor: | rainerS |
Hallo Mona!
> Although increased in recent years, the international
> vigilance on money laundering, not only in public, but also
> in the private sector, criminals always find ways to money
> laundering. For example, money laundering through the
> online banking (erleichtert).
Although the international vigilance for money laundering increased in recent years
- not only in the public, but also in the private sector -
criminals continue to find ways to launder their money.
> Professional mediation platforms, such as the auction
> platform, eBay is "publicly available and easily accessible
> from everywhere, internationally, with high transaction
> volumes, etc., and thus have a strong appeal for criminals
> to abuse them for money laundering purposes.
Wiederum: Subjekt ist Plural, also das Verb auch im Plural:
Professional mediation platforms, such as the auction platform eBay are
publicly available and easily accessible from everywhere in the world
and have a high transaction volume,
and thus have a strong appeal for criminals
to abuse them for money laundering purposes.
Viele Grüße
Rainer
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