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(Frage) beantwortet  | | Datum: | 18:28 So 13.05.2007 | | Autor: | Rated-R |
Hallo,
ich würde mich sehr freuen wenn Ihr meinen Aufsatz auf rechtschreibliche und grammatische Fehler "untersuchen" würde. Auch über Verbesserungsvorschläge würde ich mich freuen:
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Elections for the President of the United States
Id like to tell you about the elections for the President of the United States.
The candidate for the president must be born in USA, have an age least of 35 years, thereof he has to 14 years living in the USA.
He or she must to have a membership of the two main parties, too.
An election is every 4 years. In summer a party selects his candidate for the President and vice-president. First they run an election campaign, they cost severally million dollars, and often sponsored by big companies or rich mans.
The election self, detect on the Tuesday after the first Monday in November. The nation elects electors; these 508 electors form every state elect then the president.
Entitled to vote is very American, who has an age of least 18 years and are registered in a polling station. you can voting a straight ticket or a split ticket. At a straight ticket, you select a candidate form one party, and by a split ticket you choose both candidates.
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Danke.
Gruß Rated-R
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Hi,
deine Ausführungen sind inhaltlich ok, mir würde noch ein zusätzlicher Punkt dazu einfallen:
Der President kann maximal zweimal gewählt werden, also höchstens 2 Perioden im Amt sein!
Liebe Grüße
Analytiker
![[lehrer]](/images/smileys/lehrer.gif "[lehrer]")
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(Frage) beantwortet | | Datum: | 18:56 So 13.05.2007 | | Autor: | Rated-R |
Vielen dank. werd ich mit einbauen war der text auch grammatiklaisch richtig. weil ich war mir bei einigen Ausrücken nicht so sicher...
Ps: wo soll ich am besten das mit der wiederwahl einbauen. Danke
Gruß Ratet-R
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(Antwort) fertig  | | Datum: | 20:39 So 13.05.2007 | | Autor: | DommeV |
> Hallo,
>
> ich würde mich sehr freuen wenn Ihr meinen Aufsatz auf
> rechtschreibliche und grammatische Fehler "untersuchen"
> würde. Auch über Verbesserungsvorschläge würde ich mich
> freuen:
>
> ____________________________________________
>
>
> Elections for the President of the United States
>
> Id like to tell you about the elections for the President
> of the United States.
>
> The candidate for the president must be born in the USA, has
> an age at least of 35 years, therefore he has to live 14 years
> in the USA.
> He or she must have a membership of the two main
> parties, too.
>
> An election is every 4 years. In summer a party selects his
> candidate for the President and vice-president. At First they
> run an election campaign, which cost severally million
> dollars, and is often sponsored by big companies or rich mans.
>
> The election self, detect on the Tuesday after the first
> Monday in November. The nation elects electors; these 508
> electors form every state elect then the president.
>
> Entitled to vote is very American, who has an age of least
> 18 years and are registered in a polling station. you can
> vote a straight ticket or a split ticket. With a straight
> ticket, you select a candidate form one party, and with a
> split ticket you choose both candidates.
>
> ___________________________________
>
> Danke.
>
> Gruß Rated-R
>
So da waren schon einige Fehler drin, die hab ich direkt im Text korrigiert. Vielleicht guckt ja noch ein anderer drüber... Deswegen hab ich die als fehlerhaft angegeben...
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(Mitteilung) Reaktion unnötig  | | Datum: | 21:05 So 13.05.2007 | | Autor: | espritgirl |
Hey DommeV ![[winken]](/images/smileys/winken.gif "[winken]") ,
Wieso hast du deine Antwort automatisch als "fehlerhaft" markiert? Frag mal einen der Mods, ob sie das rückgängig machen können, denn es gibt für diesen Status keinen Grund  Ist doch okay, wenn du dir noch unsicher bist, dennoch hast du super auf die Frage reagiert!
Meine kleinen Änderrungen stammen auch nur aus meinem persönlichen Sprachgefühl:
> Elections for the President of the United States
>
> Id like to tell you about the elections for the President
> of the United States.
>
> The candidate for the president musthas to be born in the USA,
> has and
> an age at least of 35 years, therefore he has to live 14
> years
> in the USA.
> He or she The contestandmust have a membership of the two main
> parties, too.
> An election is every 4 years. In summer a party selects his
> candidate for the President and vice-president. At First
> they
> run an election campaign, which cost severally million
> dollars, and is often sponsored by big companies or rich
> mans.
> The election self, detect on the Tuesday after the first
> Monday in November. The nation elects electors; these 508
> electors form every state elect then the president.
> Entitled to vote is very evry American, who has an age of least
> 18 years and are is registered in a polling station. You can
> vote a straight ticket or a split ticket. With a straight
> ticket, you select a candidate form one party, and with a
> split ticket you choose both candidates.
Liebe Grüße,
Sarah 
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