geschichte korrigieren < Korrekturlesen < Englisch < Sprachen < Vorhilfe
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| Aufgabe | This is a story about two teenagers. There names are Ben und Sarah and there are best friends. In the evening their go along the street and then they are stopped by a shop. Now they are see new Inline- Skates and there are so beautiful that she want them so much , but they have no money. Then says Sarah that she would asked her parents. They are go to Sarah and asked her parents for the money, but the parent saidthat they must her money by her own (verdienen). The father (schlägt vor) that they can washing his car and than they get money. The teenagers are (einverstanden) and do it. At first is Ben not for this but then it makes him a lot of fun . Then they do all days working for the parents and a week later they havethe money for the Inline Skates. They run to the shop, but the Inline Skates are away. She go into the shop and asked but the man said the last are go ing for 30 Minutes. The teenagers go and they very (traurig). They go home and than there are standing the parents with new Inline Skates in her hand and all there friends. All says "Happy Birthday" because the two children have birthday and on the same day, too. In there work she have forgotten that they have birthday. The parents are so (stolz) and the childrens for ( das was sie geleistet haben) too. Now they can do with the money what she wont andnow they know they do all ( einladen zur) Inline Skates Bahn where she can there new inline skates (ausprobieren).
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Hallo ich bin es mal wieder luisa ich habe ein gaanz großes problem den ich habe ein foto und ich soll mir einfach eien geschichte dazu ausdenken und diese auf englisch schreiben aber damit habe ich ganz schön meine Probleme den zum einen mit der grammatik dann weiß ich manche wörter nicht und ich glaube ich wiederhole mich oft. Wäre echt nett wenn das jemand mal korrigieren könnte , wenn er sie hoffentlich versteht. Vielen Dank Luisa
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Hallo Luisa ![[winken]](/images/smileys/winken.gif "[winken]") ,
> This is a story about two teenagers. They're names are Ben
> uand Sarah and they're are best friends. In the evening their
> go along the street and then they are stopp[/s]ed by[/s] in front of a shop.
> Now they [/s]are[/s] see new Inline- Skates and there which are so
> beautiful that she wants them so much , but they both have no
> money. Then says Sarah says that she would asked will ask her parents.
> They are go to Sarah and asked her parents for the money,
> but the parent said y that they must her money by her own
> (verdienen) she has to make money on her own. The father (schlägt vor) suggests that they can washing
> his car and than they get money. The teenagers are
> (einverstanden) agree and do it. At first is Ben does not for want to do this but
> then it makes him a lot of fun . Then they do all days
> working work all days for the parents and a week later they have the money
> for the Inline Skates. They run to the shop, but the Inline
> Skates are away sold. She goes into the shop and asked s but the man shop assistant and he says that
> said the last are go ing for the last once were sold 30 Minutes ago. The teenagers go
> and they very (traurig) sad. They go home and than there are
> standing the parents stand with new Inline Skates in her their hands [blue]and
> all there friends (Was soll das heißen?)[blue]. All says "Happy Birthday" because the
> two children have birthday and on at the same day, too. In
> there During their work she they have forgotten that they have birthday. The
> parents are so (stolz) proud and the childrens [/s]for ( das was sie
> geleistet haben)[/s] are proud, too. Now they can do with the money what
> she they want to do so they invite their friends to the "Inline skates Bahn" where they can test the skates. wont andnow they know they do all ( einladen zur)
> Inline Skates Bahn where she can there new inline skates
> (ausprobieren).
Liebe Grüße,
Sarah 
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Wirklich vielen dank sarah ich bin dir wirklich sehr dankbar aber warum ist
den der ganze untere teil durchgestrichen und ab und zu kommen die rot markierten wörter wäre echt super nett von dir wenn du mir das noch mal erklären könntest. vielen Dank Luisa
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