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(Frage) beantwortet  | | Datum: | 11:31 So 31.08.2008 | | Autor: | zitrone |
Hallo,
ich hab gerad in der Schule damit angefangen Zusammenfasungen von Geschichten zu schreiben. Nun war unsere Aufgabe, eine summary zu einem Buch zu schreiben, welches wir zuletzt gelesen haben. Daher schrieb ich eine Zusammenfassung von 190 Wörtern zu "Der Besuch der alten Dame". Es geht mir nun nur darum, ob ich es richtig formuliert habe und ob es in dieser Form auch richtig ist oder auch komplett falsch.
könnte daher bitte jemand mal drüberschauen und seine Meinung dazu abgeben?? Zudem wusste ich auch nicht in welcher Zeit ich schreiben soll...Könnte da mir auch bitte jemand sagen, welche sich dafür am besten eignet?
Summary
The Visit Of The Old Lady
The book The Visit Of The Old Lady is written by Friedrich Duerenmatt in the 20th century.Its about the lady Zachanassian, who come back to her hometown to take revenge on her ex-lover.
The story is set in the town Guellen. Claire Zachanassian and Alfred Ill, the main characters, knew and loved eatch other when they were young. But one day Claire become pregnant.However Ill lost his interest in her and left her. On the top of that he doesnt father Claire's child. She go out of the town, lost her child and began to work in a brothel. Years later she married a rich man. Because of that, she become the most powerful woman in the world. When Claire turned 60 years old, she come back to Guellen. The people there think, that she is coming to donate them money for the town, which is miserable poor. Miss Zachanassian will do it, under one request: If somebody kill Alfred Ill, she would donate 1 milliard. At first everyone is against it. Some time is passing and the people in Guellen begin to make debts and at that time Ill knows, that everybody want to see him dead.
Ill was killed but only the people in Guellen know who had it done.
Feedback
I enjoyed the tragedy and the realistic in this book. At the beginning you could already say, what will happen, because its in some way human, that everyone would hurt someone when it means you will have it better. Thats really tragedy but its realistic. Furthermore you could release it at the beginning which way the people in Guellen would chose. But in some way its funny,too, because the story is so ironic that you can reflect your life with them in the book. Miss Zachanassian liked it to made sarcasm jokes.
lg zitrone
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(Antwort) fertig  | | Datum: | 12:11 So 31.08.2008 | | Autor: | Infinit |
Hallo zitrone,
um die Geschichte zu erzählen, sind beide Zeiten (Präsens und Vergangenheit) möglich. Bei einer Aufzählung dürfte die Vergangenheit sinnvoll sein, bei einem einführenden Satz (This is a summary of the story) funktioniert auch die Beschreibung im Präsens. Die darum herum gestreute Information muss natürlich in der richtigen zeitlichen Darstellung beschrieben werden. Deswegen auch meine Änderung im erstem Satz von "is" nach "was".
Kleinere Verbesserungen findest du in Deinem Posting.
Viele Grüße,
Infinit
> Hallo,
>
> ich hab gerad in der Schule damit angefangen
> Zusammenfasungen von Geschichten zu schreiben. Nun war
> unsere Aufgabe, eine summary zu einem Buch zu schreiben,
> welches wir zuletzt gelesen haben. Daher schrieb ich eine
> Zusammenfassung von 190 Wörtern zu "Der Besuch der alten
> Dame". Es geht mir nun nur darum, ob ich es richtig
> formuliert habe und ob es in dieser Form auch richtig ist
> oder auch komplett falsch.
> könnte daher bitte jemand mal drüberschauen und seine
> Meinung dazu abgeben?? Zudem wusste ich auch nicht in
> welcher Zeit ich schreiben soll...Könnte da mir auch bitte
> jemand sagen, welche sich dafür am besten eignet?
>
> Summary
> The Visit Of The Old Lady
>
> The book The Visit Of The Old Lady is(was) written by Friedrich
> Duerenmatt in the 20th century.Its about the (L)ady
> Zachanassian, who come(s) back to her hometown to take revenge
> on her ex-lover.
>
> The story is set in the town (of) Guellen. Claire Zachanassian
> and Alfred Ill, the main characters, knew and loved eatch
> other when they were young. But one day Claire become
> pregnant.However Ill lost his interest in her and left
> her. On the top of that he doesnt father Claire's child.
> She go (went) out of the town, lost her child and began to work in
> a brothel. Years later she married a rich man. Because of
> that, she become the most powerful woman in the world. When
> Claire turned 60 years old, she come back to Guellen. The
> people there think, that she is coming to donate them money
> for the town, which is miserable poor. Miss Zachanassian
> will (is willing to) do it under one request: If somebody (someone) kill(s) Alfred Ill,
> she would donate 1 milliard (Währung?). At first everyone is against
> it (this offer). Some time is passing and the people in Guellen begin (start) to
> make debts and at that time Ill knows, that everybody (everyone) want(s)
> to see him dead.
> Ill was killed but only the people in Guellen know who had
> it done.
>
> Feedback
>
> I enjoyed the tragedy and the realistic in this book. At
> the beginning you could already say, what will happen,
> because its in some way human, that everyone would hurt
> someone when it means you will have it better (someone will hurt another one if this approves this person's situation). Thats
> really tragedy but its realistic. Furthermore you could (can
> release it at the beginning which way the people in Guellen
> would (will) chose. But in some way its funny,too, because the
> story is so ironic that you can reflect your life with them
> in the book. Miss Zachanassian liked it to made sarcasm (sarcastic)
> jokes.
>
>
> lg zitrone
>
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(Mitteilung) Reaktion unnötig  | | Datum: | 19:18 So 31.08.2008 | | Autor: | zitrone |
DANKE SEHR!^^
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